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2019年11月17日 04:11来源:昆明编辑
摘要:如何预知未来?| 支招小作文
假如图中的时间线为“从过去到将来”(图中的时间线改为2014到2023),如下:
图来自剑桥雅思官方指南,由作者改编 每条线怎么写呢?示范如下: Body(其中两条线为例) The incidence of robbery has been(用现在完成时描述从过去到现在) stable within a range of 500 to 900 cases per year, and this stability(用表述趋势或者格局的词作主语)is forecast to(对于将来的预测,不要用will,因为will表示的事件发生的可能性过高,超过了能被预测的可能性) remain in the future few years. 如果句型套用上一条线的句型: The incidence of burglary has since a growth to the peak (3,800 cases)(介词短语作为副词词性的短语,可以放在have/has和done之间) fallen to the historical low (1,200 cases). According to the projection (如果有这个说法在先,后面就可以用will) , the situation will not have further improvement (“情况不会进一步改善”,避免机械描述成“数值不会进一步下降”) , and the annual number will stabilize at roughly 1,400. 接下来,请大家找出剑桥真题集9并翻到76页(四饼图) 对于将来的某一个时间点上的事实的描述,注意according to the projection和the forecast suggests的用法(以意大利的2050年的情况为例): According to the projection for the year of 2050, Italians under the age of 14 will be a proportionally smaller population. Meanwhile, the forecast suggests that there will be noticeable shrinkage of the 15-59 population tobarely(勉强地) 50 percent. It is most notable that Italy’s aged society is predicted to deteriorate(避免机械描述数据,而写成“老龄社会恶化”) with the senior citizens to take up a massive portion (over 40 percent) of the nation.
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