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支招小作文 | 惊了!表里没几个数字~

2019年11月21日 04:09来源:昆明编辑

摘要:支招小作文 | 惊了!表里没几个数字~

雅思小作文题目

The table below shows the changes of the percentage of visitors in 8 great countries that most international tourists visited in 2009 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 


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惊了?惊了!见惯了满眼数字的表,没见过表里仅有8个数字。很慌,很方,很正常。

定睛一看,分组其实依然很明晰:

1. 正数 即增长的(有多有少);

2. 负数 即下降的;

3. 零 即没变的。

高分范文及解析

In the table is the statistical presentation ← “数据化呈现”,是一种高bigger的说法 of the changed popularity with visitors, in percentage terms ←“以百分比计算”, of 8 Great Countries between 2009 and 2010.


Except the UK, 引导数值的从句句型之一(定语从句)→ which saw a 4-percent slightslip in the number of visitors, and France, whose popularity stayed unchanged,←考虑到“负数组”仅一个国家,“零组”也仅有一个国家,所以干脆上来就把这两个国家写完,然后专心写“正数组”国家→ the other countries witnessed either a surge or amarginal increase of popularity. Germany stood out, 引导数值的从句句型之二(状语从句)→ as its number of tourists shot up, and had the fastest growth. In the US and China, the other two most desired tourist destinations, the number of visitors also grew fast ←要敢于不写具体数字,而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势. Meanwhile, the 6-percent growth in Spain is also noticeable, and the insignificant growth in Turkey and Italy ← 要敢于不写具体数字,而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势 contrasted sharply with the three previous countries.


Overall, the change of popularity between the two years varied markedly from one country to another.

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