2021年2月25日雅思大作文题目

Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

高分范文及解析

01

For some people, the most critical prerequisite for success is to receive a good education. However, there are other people, including me, believing that success does not always belong to those well-educated ones. 

02

The definition of success, in most people’s eyes, must be the accumulation of material wealth. This, in many cases, is achievable with a fancy degree, as it is always education that expands the human mind with knowledge and hones their skills, guaranteeing that they are competent and qualified for a high-paying job. Not only this, but the educational qualifications can also put people on the path of self-exploration, another facet of being successful. The underlying idea is that reading, writing, and learning on the shoulders of great minds help spark ideas and unlock potentials, with which one could lead a successful life, not financially, but spiritually.

解析

Ø 不过分贪恋长难复杂句，长短结合的段落读起来节奏感会更强。

Ø 根据写作任务要求先讨论方观点：学历可以带来财富上的成功及自我精神上的成功

Ø 本段的语法多样化：原因状语从句、强调句、分词短语后置、宾语从句、并列结构、同位语、表语从句、定语从句等。

03

However, this is not always the case; otherwise, there would not be so many widely recognized people who have not actually received a decent education. These people’s achievements largely hinge on other elements, for example, their talents -deciding whether one could be a prominent artist, or their persistence and learning agility – characters that allow consistent self-improvement. Furthermore, sometimes, the higher the academic degree is, the more carefully people contemplate. Exactly because of this, well-educated people may behave hesitantly when facing new situations, whereas those less-educated are more straightforward. The time they bravely seize the chanceis when they outperform their competitors. 

解析

Ø 揪住“always”这个单词讨论第二方观点：确实，学历不总会带来成功，因为成功还看中其他要素，同时学历不高的人往往更能一股劲往前闯不多想，恰巧抓住机遇。

Ø 本段的语法多样化：插入语结构、比较结构、对比结构、状语从句等。

04

In conclusion, indeed, success is far from easily attainable without proper academic degrees. Yet, I have to reiterate that the degrees are not necessarily a guarantee of success, by which I mean it needs the combination of educational qualifications and other necessary qualities for one to blossom.