2021年3月6日雅思大作文题目

In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

高分范文及解析

01

In modern society, delayed parenthood is nothing unusual. This trend is in my view principally caused by people’s attitude towards career and the development of fertility treatment. In this essay, I will discuss these and analyze how this trend affects society and family life.  

解析

Ø 开头部分即说清楚主要的写作内容

Ø 改写题干，关键在于灵活改述而不仅是在单个单词上做同义替换的手脚

Ø parenthood：为人父母 

Ø delayed延缓的

02

From the perspective of personal interest, there is a clear incentive for the pregnancies later in life: to increase the lifetime earning potential (为了工作多赚钱). Currently, increasingly men and women are career-oriented, thus delaying marriage to their 30s or even 40s to seek more education and secure a better job. This is especially true in some women, who believe that early marriage and childbirth will hinder them from advancing in work. High technology has also contributed to the flexibility in fertility (生育技术使人们无需担心生育能力退化而早早产子). Unlike decades ago, when women worried about waning fertility and gave birth early, nowadays, couples can choose egg freezing, which enables them to wait until the right time to be parents.  

解析

Ø 回应个写作任务，分析原因

Ø incentive：动机

Ø pregnancies later in life：晚育

Ø career-oriented：以工作为重的

Ø secure获得

Ø hinder sb. from doing sth.：妨碍

Ø fertility 生育

Ø waning 衰退的

03

Exactly because of these reasons above, when a couple finally decides to have their own child, their family life gain certain perks. This is because older parents, in most cases, have already achieved their career goals. With a stable income, they tend to be more tolerant and focused in parenting, thereby a positive growth environment for children and a harmonious parent-child relationship (对家庭：成长环境好、家庭关系和睦). Although the individuals have seen virtues in the delay, this is not necessarily the case with the whole society. More precisely, the low birthrate would inevitably translate into the aging of population, and the graying society, in other words, means a lack of productive labors in the near future (对社会：老龄化严重、劳动力缺乏). 

解析

Ø 回应第二个写作任务，分析影响

Ø perk：好处

Ø parenting：育儿

Ø translate into：转化

Ø the graying society：老龄化社会

Ø productive labor：有价值的劳动力