2021年5月29雅思大作文题目

Some people say advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. 

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

范文及解析

Introduction

For years, people have been bombarded with advertisements. It is criticized by some people, but praised by others.

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Many people find advertising a great help for the economy. This is partly because advertising, as a marketing tool, increases the value of products and directly convinces prospective buyers to purchase by showing positive images of products like diverse appearances, excellent qualities, and competitive prices. Usually, the more valuable and complete information it tells, the more additional products and services individuals and businesses purchase, and thus, the more dynamic economy would be. By encouraging more buying, advertising also indirectly drives yield improvements and productivity enhancements, which would facilitate job growth eventually. The growth, without doubt, is another motivator of economic growth.

【解析】

※  回应一部分写作任务，分析观点1

1）广告会直接诱导消费

2）广告能间接创造岗位

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Those who are averse to advertising might complain that audience would no longer be satisfied with their status quo. This is not difficult to understand, as it is exactly how advertisements promote the sales of products: to manipulate target consumers by showing them what the ideal life is supposed to be and suggesting to them how terrible their ordinary life is. Those advertising luxury cars, fineries, and jewelry can be examples of this. Once advertisements have ruined their self-esteem, it is time to encourage consumption, of goods they do not need, and in the long run, materialism may be rampant.

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※  回应一部分写作任务，分析观点2

Conclusion

In conclusion, advertising plays a vital role in the economic system, and thus, should be promoted, but at the same time, to avoid being manipulated by it, consumers should set up the correct consumption concept: accept the status quo and avoid over consumption.

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※  总结上文