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摘要：10月12日托福独立写作真题范文 | 那些“偷来”的时间，应该做什么？
2019.10.12（下午） 独立写作题
Which of the following do you think students should do during their free time of the night?
、Do work through which they gain work experience, such as 2、Learn sporting skills;
3、Learn to play a musical instrume
写作范文
审题时注意：如果把想法集中在选项上，思路会局限。相反，要充分利用问题部分的情景设置：the night
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全篇的论证结构：同时否定选项1和2成为独立的一个段落。
首先针对选项1让步。→ Earning an income may be the immediate consideration among the students who choose to do part-time jobs. Meanwhile, a volunteering job, although it does not pay, helps students to gain work experience and to build a social network. 接下来的考虑是：接着写对于选项2的让步，还是先用转折把选项1否定掉。是赶紧转着否定，否则的话，让步内容会冗长。→ However, work, paid or unpaid, is exhausting. 接下来顺延着把选项1和2共同的劣势说完。→ In fact, it is the same case with learning sporting skills. Although sports strengthen our body, they consume energy, which should be saved for the next day’s study. 然后，分别否定选项1和2。→In addition, many jobs are available off campus, and when they finish at the late night, students have to travel distances during the night, and their safety and security is uncertain. 接下来讨论sports的时候，可以和jobs建立逻辑关系，避免流水账一样的讨论。→ Although students do not have to leave the campus to learn sports, many sports require daylight, or proper weather or facilities that are unavailable during the night. 反驳时，也可以举例（举例不是仅仅可用于立论）。→ For instance, playing tennis is impossible unless there is good lighting and a good weather, and seldom can a person swim in an outdoor pool in the freezing temperature.
全篇的论证结构：另外一个单独的段落讨论选项3：对比与选项1和2的优势，以及自己的益处。
Unlike doing a job, particularly a job for money, and doing sports, playing a musical instrument is easy, consuming less strength or energy. 通过逻辑链接，迅速引出关于益处的讨论。→ In fact, it may be quite relaxing. 接下来举例论证可能是论证的选择。→ Last semester, when I was learning piano, the melodious sounds were delightful, creating a lot of pleasure for the night, and every time, I woke up the next morning revitalized. 接下来讨论益处的第二点。略
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