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托福写作分不高?来看看高分句式都是怎样的

2021年03月30日 02:30来源:昆明编辑

摘要:

很多同学在写作文时都想用尽量的单词、句式,那么在考官眼里,什么样的句式更加分呢?那就是地道的句子,今天我们就来看这样几个句式。


句式1

原句:

Rarely has supposedly bitter medicine tasted so sweet.

句式提取:

Rarely has supposedly a. + n. + V.ed + a.

很少有原本很…的变成…

例句说明:

Rarely has supposedly difficult communication became so easy as the advancement of the internet.

曾经困难的沟通现在随着互联网的发展变得如此容易。

Rarely has supposedly distant relationship between people in different regions became so close.

不同地区的人们之间本以为遥远的关系变得如此密切。


句式2

原句:

The vulnerability of workers with  family responsibilities became acutely clear when schools closed.

句式提取:

The vulnerability of sb. became acutely clear when…

某人的脆弱性在...发生时变得尤为明显

例句说明:

The vulnerability of rote learning became acutely clear when students utilize their knowledge and skills in real world.

当学生在现实世界中运用他们的知识和技能时,死记硬背的脆弱性变得尤为明显。

The vulnerability of hierarchical organization became acutely clear when it comes to competing with other companies in an ever-changing market.

在不断变化的市场中与其他公司竞争时,阶层组织的脆弱性就显得尤为明显。


句式3

原句:

The market is booming as gay Americans reach marrying age and elective single mother hood becomes more widespread. Partly because conceiving using donor sperm is a lot more straightforward and affordable than doing so using donor eggs, children born through sperm donors are likely to outnumber those from egg donors.

(随着美国同性恋达到结婚年龄,选择性单亲妈妈越来越普遍,这个市场正在蓬勃发展。部分原因是使用捐赠者精子受孕比使用捐赠者卵子受孕简单得多,通过捐赠者精子出生的孩子数量可能超过卵子捐赠者。)

句式提取:

The market is booming as … becomes more widespread. Partly because doing A is a lot more straightforward and affordable than doing B.

随着…变得越来越普遍,市场正在蓬勃发展。部分原因是:做A比做B简单且便宜得多。

例句说明:

The market of online education is booming as the use of the internet becomes more wide spread. Partly because because receiving top-tier education online is more straightforward and affordable than having classes in the classroom.

随着互联网的广泛应用,网络教育市场蓬勃发展。部分原因是因为接受在线教育比在教室上课更直接、实惠。


总结:

毫无疑问,备考托福写作是需要全方位的能力培养和提升.其中,积累地道、高分的句型句式是可以帮我们提高写作分数的关键,所以上面的句式考生们就可以经常在自己的写作中运用,熟练之后在考场上灵活运用!

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